I love sunsets so the title really caught my eye and pulled me into the poem. I thought how can a sunset be frozen haha
We are all spell bound by sunsets as they are heart warming and beautiful to look at. They give us joy and tranquility feelings inside. Butt I love how you comparethe sunset to your love unique as I have never seen that before. Truly rremarkable wording here. I have never truly thought of eyes as whimsical. Though they are because they can dance and play with the feelings of your soul. The imagery you describe is immaculate. Misty blue eyes that dance with yours. I
I love the painting a mural in your heart wow. We can all speak something with our eyes without speaking a single thing. The waters of your eyes are lovely because if you look deep enough you truly can swim inthem and they say words without speaking a single one again wow.
Everytime you look into a person's heart it truly is to beamazed. I truly feel the love you portray just from blue eyes. Each moment with your true love should and can never be replaced. Each person is unique in their own way just like a sunset. It is a great moment in time that everyone has come to love and will fall for someday. Beautiful 5
Spellbound am I by you--
a frozen sunset;
>> Truly amazing Jace, i love that 1st word a lot.. the whole expression is too meaningful..
of whimsical eyes from
honeydew to misty blue-
^^I can't believe how strong these lines are.
into a mural of your heart,
casted upon waters
valued at a thousand words.
^^Temps this is just purely perfect.
Word choice is no bet unique. worded in a very special way. Very creative and very special.
I am in love with each single line..
Each syllable a prized possession,
a piece of authentic worth-
to never be exchanged
but with a replica of you;
a soul of adversity.
^^^U have no idea how strong this stanza is.
COherent meaningful and flowless!
Your images are very unique in this poem..so much admiration and a lot of original-poetic lines.
-I admired this piece!
BADLY ashamed that I have not read it b4!
Wow. I loved this poem from the title and beginning! You write about the nicest kind of love, that only people who have shared this experience could understand. It gave me such a warm feeling inside and made me appreciate love more! I love how you describe a perfect love as a frozen sunset. If only we could really freeze such a beautiful romantic moment so nothing bad could ruin it! Beautiful poem! And congratulations on a well-deserved win!