Nightmares Of Hell

by Tangible heartache   Aug 5, 2010


Wandering, Drifting In A Depth Of Nothing,
Terror Of A Tortured Soul, Screaming,
Blackness Of An Abyss Looming Over,
Overwhelmed With Reality Of Dreaming,

Sinking, Gone Beyond Reach Of Help,
Limbs Being Ripped One By One, Crying,
Shreds Of Clothes Lying In A Pool Of Blood,
Doubled Over With Pain Of Dying,

Flying, Amongst Drifting Nightmares,
The Smell Of Burning, Rotting Flesh,
No Escape From This Cold Hell,
Drowning In The Sorrow Of Death,

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  • 13 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    I didn't like how everything was capitalized. I also just want to comment on how in the last stanza you have 'burning flesh' but then 'cold hell' to me that doesn't make much sense. But otherwise it was a good read. Put together well.
    5/5

    Svandyke

  • 13 years ago

    by OmniLotus

    Beautiful rhythmical flow all the way

  • 13 years ago

    by slighte

    Just breathe.

    [and yay for writing again..]