Comments : Nightmares Of Hell

  • 13 years ago

    by slighte

    Just breathe.

    [and yay for writing again..]

  • 13 years ago

    by OmniLotus

    Beautiful rhythmical flow all the way

  • 13 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    I didn't like how everything was capitalized. I also just want to comment on how in the last stanza you have 'burning flesh' but then 'cold hell' to me that doesn't make much sense. But otherwise it was a good read. Put together well.
    5/5

    Svandyke