Comments : Imperfection

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This poem is absolutely amazing. It has a ton of vivid description and an excellent choice of words. There is a beautiful flow, that makes this poem even more enjoyable. I love the emotion in this piece and I love the message you state very clearly. The beginning is intruiging and the end is so strong. this is so worth a 5/5! Great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by W0rld 0f t3ars

    Thanks so much A Dreamer, mean's a lot :)