It was effective the way you started every line with "love my depression" and then made a statement contradicting that, i thought the idea was great. And i really liked it.

However maybe you could have worded it a little better.
I personally didnt really like:
"Love my Depression.
Talking..I mean lie-ing my way to the top."
^ that bit there.

nice work still :)

Really love this one5/5

A very clever write. I liked the repetitiveness, I use it in my own writing sometimes, and I find it really helps to get your point across. 5/5 keep writing!

mandy :)

I loved reading your poem. I am into contradictions because life seems to be all about that. :)

Nice form and flow;) I used to love mine too...until I figured out it was all a lie.