Comments : Midnight Dreams

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very intense and well penned

  • 7 years ago

    by Soft Parade

    That was great, I really enjoyed it. Saw alot of my own frustration coming through as I read on. Thanks.

  • 7 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    I loved reading this. It was very different, wasn't expecting the ending. The rhyming was a little off, but it seemed to flow good. I liked how you broke it up into seperate parts, that helped a lot. Keep up the great work.
    5/5

    Svandyke