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by Michael D Nalley
Very intense and well penned
by Soft Parade
That was great, I really enjoyed it. Saw alot of my own frustration coming through as I read on. Thanks.
I loved reading this. It was very different, wasn't expecting the ending. The rhyming was a little off, but it seemed to flow good. I liked how you broke it up into seperate parts, that helped a lot. Keep up the great work.