Comments : Automatic Fate

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece is interesting, it has a satisfying word choice as well as a story to tell, yet your voice still manages to be present throughout the entire piece. I think you have done a magnificent job showing what the world ought to know. There are slight flecks of emotion and they dust the piece, adding a perfect touch. If this is not worthy of a 5/5 then please do tell me, what is. Excellent job.