Many points of make..but briefly...if anyone says this rhyme was forced am gna gigle..cause it was flawless..

ur ideas and emotions been all related to each other..and u expressed ur self very well.

ur word choice was in its place and u did know how to play with them.

your feelings been too much negative and i hopeur only letting it out, cause there is alwaus another way..what ends wrong doesnt exsists

5/5
keep it up

Ive missed reading your writes Austin... they are always so heart touching. I can relate to theses words so much...

"A heart so broken inside,
Crippling all I know."

I have a poem on here expressing similiar thoughs , in mine it speaks of a "shattered" heart ( its an older poem of mine called "My Heart" ) yours reminds me of it. Very well written & expressed Austin. Take care & keep penning ! :)