Comments : Sunshine

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    As I said this brought tears to my eyes,,was extremely deep..
    u have used most of the true things about me..and what made me smile is mentioning my name thats written over the cedar tree haha..how wise

    trust me this was so full of gorgeous images..and professional lines...with much care I am going to love this poem for my whole life

    thank u so much for making such a beautiful verse..
    flawless with the emotions...I feel so speechless

    5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Cindy

    Michael
    What a beautiful poem of friendship written for a beautidul soul. You have described her perfectly.
    Excellent job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This indeed is a lovely poem of a beautiful friendship..nicely described and soft..liked the read!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    That is my Nana alright:)

    You made her a lovely tribute and indeed she is all that and much more. I bet she makes many men wish they were a teenager all over again, ha ha ha!

    God job, Michael:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Again and again I find this poem such a "sun" for my rainy days... lol ..thank u again and again XD i LOVE to read it over and over

  • 6 years ago

    by TSI25

    Despite the heavily religious connotations i do like it very much. The rhymes are apt, the flow is good, and its comparably happier than a lot of the other poems on this sight. It also has some beautiful imagery, the scene of the angel flying with the broken wing ans singing through the birds was particularly lucid for me. well done, 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by shadow

    I LUV THIS POEM SO MUCH. PLZZ CHECK OUT SOME OF MY POEMS,SO I CAN GET YOUR ADVICE

  • 5 years ago

    by shadow

    I LUV THIS POEM SO MUCH. PLZZ CHECK OUT SOME OF MY POEMS,SO I CAN GET YOUR ADVICE

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a beautiful piece of work. Lovely.