Comments : A Girl

  • 13 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Jad,

    It is good to dream, it sets a goal to work towards. I hope you find that girl of your dreams.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Oh jad...how deep this was...heartfelt poem..
    U went too deep this time..and i love it
    \i love ur word choice..the emotions wow u made so clear/almost felt each single beat.. of fear love and passion

    sadly penned
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Dept should be debt. Easily said, full of emotion & touched the readers heart...*hugs* Hope you find that happiness in your life soon!

  • 13 years ago

    by Cassandra

    Wow i love it. Its beautiful. Open up tell your dream girl how you feel.

    5/5