Comments : Time's Running Out

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was really creepy, the feeling of someone watching over you...gives me chills hahaahh. Well done girl!

  • 13 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Wow, this was really great, but when you wrote "suspect" did you mean expect? Anyways, I know that feeling well, and I hope that it ceases for you. But what are you referring to exactly?

  • 13 years ago

    by iRobbiee

    I really dunno... I just felt like there was a monster in my closet last night and that when I go to sleep someone always near watching really close..:-/ suspect and expect they both sound good...ill figure it out thank you..

  • 13 years ago

    by IML

    I like this poem. i remember feeling these moments all the time with that someone you like. it brings me back.

    ty for commenting on my poem too btw. means a lot to me, no one has rated or commented in weeks.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jessie

    Doesn't happen often, but I was actually captivated after the first verse, I wanted to read on to see who he was.

    I think you are an incredible writer with an incredible talent. Keep it up.