Comments : Emotional Surge

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    JAd...a flowing poem..with gd expressions..and very deep lines...
    I loved how ur feelings been penned so well over this.. but it is realy a sad poem

    i do love sad poems but i hope u right a happy one just as gd as this.

    gr8..keep going
    5.5

  • 7 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Jad, this to shall pass ...... good poem of baring the brunt of feelings and emotions,
    thanks for sharing

  • 7 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Some of the grammar is a little off and periods seem to be used for style's sake but without regard for sentence structure. Other than that, I like the "Suffering isn't enough?" insertion. It struck me as curious and different - good things. I also like that you used the word "mountainous!" Very nice.

    A good write overall.

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Veryy well done..congratulations..and this proves what I said for u last night in the club chatting thread last night haha

    gr888888 job

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    It feels like one is caught in a whirlwind of
    emotion..good choice of words where feelings
    are poured out..congrats on the win!

  • 7 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This poem touches me so much. It's being a while that i havn't red a poem and before the end i had to take a pause to savor the beauty of such a sad , love poem like this. We all feels emotions, but not most of us could put it in words like you do. Very, very well done. Keep it up, kel.

  • 3 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Well done!
    strong and deep words