Comments : They Speak Of An End, Lord

  • 7 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Excellent poem; this is exactly what I needed to read today. I'm just shocked that it has no ratings! 5/5 Keep it up, sister in Christ;)

  • 7 years ago

    by Jad

    An absolutely wonderful piece describing one who might of just came to salvation or perhaps as the above comment they are trying to get on the right path with God again and so the Holy Spirit give them insight as they read the word trying to find their way.

    "Deceived but not on purpose,
    There is evil to be purged.
    But fighting wars to end the wars?
    That path gets more diverged."

    My favorite line as it almost gives a sense of hopelessness and yet all is not lost as the end of the poem ends in hope. Good job and keep writing.

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Not only is this poem well written it has a powerful message

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    This title does not appeal much to me, I would have chosen "Impossible End"

    Crying on the paper now,
    These scriptures are well used.
    Still praying for forgiveness, when,
    He said "Your not confused."

    ^^
    you're instead of your

    This is a whole story you have written down, and I think it is a good way to honor Him:)

    a very well done from me,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by Chelsey

    WOW!!

    God is amazing isn't he?? i was so exited reading this poem for many reasons. One, because another young person was writing about God, Two, the whole message was dead on! and Three, it brought comfort to me!

    I get upset sometimes when people bash the bible without reading it or studying it themselves. More than half the time they have no idea what they are talking about. They are missing theese beautiful scriptures like you pointed out. its really sad.

    Keep your faith. Keep reading the word. Never let the enemy seal your joy! Gods given you a talent to write, use it for him. This was awesome!
    Chelsey

  • 6 years ago

    by ganjaru

    Im breathless after reading your poem ..
    your so talented hun . 5/5

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Love tbis beautiful inspiring write. Added to my faves. You're blessed. :-)