A sensual write as one can tell and yet delicantly written. The form in which you have written this has helped the reader as he or she is reading. The sights and imagery are also very good in this piece.

"Dancing, the wind stroked her shoulders,
revealing glistening tender skin
as she caressed rose colored hair."

A very beautiful and descriptive line giving the reader the idea of what this woman looks like. Many feelings come across this piece and make it beautiful from line to line.

I think this is one of the most creative free versed poems penned, I was able to feel and see the words u poetically wrote down.
felt it was like a love image yet with motion..

the word choice was really deep..and full of love.
the emotions revived through the words u chose.

again a very very gr8 piece
that had a real effect over me
5/5