I was a little confused on how it ended but I think the sad, confused emotions within the poem were well portrayed and conveyed across the readers. Keep writing!

Very nice free flow here, expressing emotion and that wonderful longing for happily ever after that most of us never really completley out grow I really enjoyed reading this

Again, another lovely piece. I loved your third stanza the best, i like how you said that every fairytale has a twist! Great work!