This was a good write, i think you did a great job in expressing your emotions. It is such an easy piece to relate to. Simple, yet lovely, good work!

I agree..this was good it was great and realy easy to relate to.. I like it a lot that im gonna read it again... because right now I believe yur poem is gonna get me through what im going through... it was excellent

Ouch! It's very touching. You shouldn't have to go through this at such young age. You're too beautiful to be treated this way.