Comments : Whiter Shade of Pale

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Joe this is a very descriptive, creative and amazing poem by you.
    you have penned down a poem with so much love and admiration for someone , in whichh my memories relate almost 200% to !

    Very sweet ..extremely flawless, with the perfect word choice!
    and just how amazing it feels when someone comes past our life, when we need them the most..truly feels like its just a dream to come true.

    lol i hope u dont wake up from it like i did :)
    5/5
    a very creative poem Joe, u chose a gd title