Comments : Rage (Cinquain)

  • 7 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Woh.. A powerful write and a brilliant Cinquain! :) Have never tried this form .. but after reading yours I would love to try! :)

    Brilliant Meena... Well Done :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Some words actually do ahve the power to damage a relationship beyond repair..

    Evocative work from you, Meena:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by Jad

    An excellent form to use. I love writing with this form as it gives a challenge to the writer to get the reader to understand what is happening in such few lines. Every line of your poem was carefully placed and the flow was great as well. I loved the overall idea of the poem to. Good job and keep writing.

  • 7 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Perfect wording, you are so right, we sometimes have so much rage inside us that we end up saying something we shouldn't and that ends up hurting someone. Very nicely written

  • Facinating Poem Meena
    & so very true.....5/5.....Jim

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Meena this is really impressing,,such a truthful piece that u worded in a very very smart way.
    Ur words just hit the nail on the head.

    and I cantr but agree with u...rage ..and words..are sharper than swords .,

    :)

    5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Meena this is really impressing,,such a truthful piece that u worded in a very very smart way.
    Ur words just hit the nail on the head.

    and I cantr but agree with u...rage ..and words..are sharper than swords .,

    :)

    5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Meena, a very good write,

  • 7 years ago

    by Melissa

    So true. This piece flowed effortlessly. You shine in formed poetry. It's exciting to see what you'll come up with next. Great writing, awesome message! :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Lana

    So few words and yet they say so much. The tongue is definately a very powerful weapon and can inflict much pain. Nicely done.

  • 7 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Yes words are really powerful. Nothing is sharper than words. If you should compare it with a knife, most times when you get cut by a knife, it time it heal and left no traces, but with words, it's stored in the back of the mind and possible to return to the surface anytime. Well done, kel.

  • 2 years ago

    by NoHopeLeft

    This is so simple and short, however its powerful and pacts a punch i like it a lot x