An excellent form to use. I love writing with this form as it gives a challenge to the writer to get the reader to understand what is happening in such few lines. Every line of your poem was carefully placed and the flow was great as well. I loved the overall idea of the poem to. Good job and keep writing.
Yes words are really powerful. Nothing is sharper than words. If you should compare it with a knife, most times when you get cut by a knife, it time it heal and left no traces, but with words, it's stored in the back of the mind and possible to return to the surface anytime. Well done, kel.