Some really unique imagery painted here, I have never heard the sunrise described as a aterfall of light, I was transported to the moon watching the sun light fall down over teh earth when i read that...top quality!!!
I dnt have words to say...Im speechless by r word choice..just speechless..and dont think this is a lame comment..but I really lack the ability to choose a part to comment over..am just facinated by that you have written..
no one write nature better than you Jad..oonly Ingrid write as good..wen its about nature..
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Wow... beautiful poem! I love the vivid imagery you've created .. It made me envision it and I really enjoyed it. Congratulations on the win!
Your poem reminded me of my poem "Rise, Rise, Oh Sun" The meaning seems similar. Great job!
The way you made this poem so picturesque is amazing! The comparison of colors to the lives of people and the contrast of light and dark to lies most definetly makes this poem stand out from ordinary poetry! Great work.