Comments : Silver Dreams

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    A very good poem that was full of imagery and creativity. I like the way how you described everything in your poem, very neat. The title was a good choice as well, as it pulled me into the poem and starting from line one I was captivated until the end. Good job and keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Lovely, absolutely visually lovely...
    one joins you on the walk...

    I did wonder at the word 'fury' in there but...
    I was not on that walk...;~)

  • 13 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I thought this was beautiful, great job, you had me with the first line and held me to the end, nice flow as well.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This poem was sweet perfection, wording, imagery..it blew me away. It looks like a format, the way it rhymes and the length of the lines...

    Cooling winds of season's end
    Follow like a long lost friend
    Till their fury sets me free

    ^^
    I recognize this feeling!

    A good poem enriches one's emotional world and yours certainly did.

    Splendid work,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    CAn't say more then has been said. Ingrid had it right sweet perfection

  • 13 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thank you all for your kind words.

  • 13 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    This has my vote. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I can just picture that beautiful scenery..with
    colors and life. I really liked this read!

  • 13 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Wonderful write all around.

  • 13 years ago

    by Silent

    Nice flow and feel.
    Cheers to the seasons!