Comments : One Of Those Aha Moments

  • 13 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Precisely delineated and poignantly delivered....
    really quite impressive...

    "...more docile
    than regret"
    ........woohoo..........

    (plus I had a momentary chuckle imagining porcupines in the air....
    but then.....an aha moment for me, too....;~)

  • 13 years ago

    by sibyllene

    What a nice little gem of a poem... small and sparkling, and the last four lines are pristine.