This is such a beautiful poems and cAN YU PLEASE COMMENT MY POETRY.

Good job =) i like it a lot =D

--Hannah

Great job; hey, did you mean "rowing down through a canyon without a paddle?"

This poem is sooo cute i loveeeeee it!! 5/5 this is goin in my favs =)

I know I've already commented but I just think this poem is so beautiful =D

GREAT WORK!

Please comment on my poetry if you don't mind =D

Thanks =D

--Hannah

I really like the images that you create, even without using lots of words. I like the concise nature of the poem and you do a very good job of sending the message without droning at all. Nice to see a guy do it up on here. I like the white satin glove too haha, like I said the imagery is very strong. Good job

Its great lt! i love the way u worked w/ it! its beautiful!
with love!
nikki