Comments : If I opened my heart to you

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    An amazing and sad poem all in one. I really like how you went about writing this for that contest thing and you described your emotions well and fluently. The flow was good as well though it did seem a little distorted but overall it was great. You are going to be a great poet someday, I can feel it, and these first works will help you get there. Great job and keep writing.