Great poem 5/5!
I Really Enjoyed The Creativity!
Keep Writing!
Will You Please Rate And Comment One Of My Poems Too?
Thanks And Great Night To You!
-Jessi.

This poem reflects what many poets must feel and it is written well in a flawless flow

Many thanks for you honest opinion - I can certainly understand why you find it confusing :)
I'll try and explain as best I can:
- I can recall every moment of writing the poem and everything that I felt at the time, but not the actual words that I wrote.
- I say it surpassed my others because if a poem's worth is determined by the feeling that went into it, then this was definitely my best.
- As for it changing my life, she was due to come and stay with me and I could have waited until she arrived before giving it to her. This was my choice - should I send it to her beforehand? I did and she called me to say she wasn't coming because she couldn't give me the commitment I needed. I have never seen her again since.
- So sending the poem was the moment when I left "our tower" and sent her the key.
- Despite all this I have never regretted either writing it or sending it.

Hope this helps you and anyone else who is confused by it.

You are very talented. Very great choice of words. With time, i have learnt onething, that things that came from deep within one's soul, are the things that touches the most. What i admire the most is the fact you can take a simple poem and turns it into a masterpiece, like reading the start of a book that only goes to the middle and waited impatiently to see the end. Very well done. Impressive piece of work, kel.

I thought this was a lovely write, i did not even mind the repeating line, sometimes that can be the tricky part. I was not sure you needed the word yet in your last line though, that was the only part that through me off for a second.

Great job.

Good write i really enjoyed it, very creative and interesting
keep it up