A sad poem... loneliness is indeed hard to bear. But take care we are always here for you Sourav :) A deeply expressed write.. well written.

Lots of Love, Olwin

This was indeed a sad poem but still you got your message across in this poem. I really liked the idea of being alone though. You had it at a good repetiveness level in your poem. Also There was some nice imagery in there which kept the readers mind active and engaged while reading. Great job and keep writing.

Sourav,
Good content, was a bit hard to read and follow, the rhyme was forced in a few places.
Thanks for sharing, keep writing :-)

Being lonely when you are with someone is not a good feeling and it does make you cry lonely tears.

//But with you I was lonely too
Wasn't I?
// that is the tragedy of life... to be alone even when you are with someone

//When I reach the horizon, I find
A lonely sky;
// beautiful

//When I'm finished and done, there was
A lonely tear. // that expresses your feelings so well ... loved it...

touching and beautiful write. Lonely can be painful and the more we try to fight it, the more it become intense...

Loneliness is a killer and it keeps the heart
cold and lonely too...a very sad poem and know that we are all here for you when you need someone to talk to...take care.

Seems like it's been forever since I read your work. You never disappoint as each poem has a personality of it's own. Awesome write with sad overtones.

No one wants to be alone
Yet all are lonely
Everyone needs companion
Even if one only;

When you left me finally
Alone I sighed
But with you I was lonely too
Wasn't I?

^^
the first line is a littel forced, I would say
"when you finally left me"
I like the deeper message in this part, when you realize you were alone in spite of her companionship

Cigarette burns and runs in deep
As I see
Amidst the clouds of smoke
A lonely me;

^^^
You should try and not use any substance and get to the bottom of your pain. I stopped smoking in 2000 and it made me a stronger person, after having been a heavy smoker for 20 years.

I like the image you painted, though. Almost like an old black and white movie:)

I push the clouds in despair
Want to fly
When I reach the horizon, I find
A lonely sky;

^^
This is beautiful and so very true, when you are alone, no place that you go to fills that void, it is in your head and heart.

Lonely words I write in reclusiveness
No one's here
When I'm finished and done, there was
A lonely tear.

^^
Either you use past tense or present tense throughout a stanza.
So I would suggest:
When I'm finished and done, there is
A lonely tear.

These remarks are minor issues, you wrote a truly beautiful poem, one which I can relate to very well.

5/5 Ingrid

This is a heart breaking poem. I can honestly say I was able to believe each single word!
due to the deeeeeeeep wording, the amazing flow..tho one or 2 lines felt forced. But obviously it's such a poem, that can speak to the beats on ones heart!
congrats; well deserved..

Awww... Wow... this poem is so sad and heartbreaking but I loved it. It's so well-written. Congratulations on the win! You deserve it. Excellent job :)

This is amazing

Congrats on a well deserved win :)

Beautiful ! Epic ! simply Perfect ! 100/5

THSES ARE GREAT LINE,No one wants to be alone
Yet all are lonely

good topic
and Good writing
I like this

Excellent poem

Deffenitly deserved a win!!!!