Comments : A Rose

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A rose can be different things during its life but most of all it is the most beautiful of all God's creations. I love how you have described the many aspects of a rose. Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Jad, one of your best poems in my opinion. Excellent job using the rose in this personification of love. The many colors, shapes and feelings associated with both the flower and emotion were tied together by you in this outstanding penned poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Petals lightly bent
    painted blood red and pink,
    contrasting beauty in imagery
    crafted from nature.

    *This is beautiful honey. Such a simple stanza but so well written. It really spoke to me. I loved it. thw whole piece was very lovely. Keep it up :] Nik*

  • 13 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Lovely imagery

    //Delicate life embraced
    scented with untold beauty,
    shaping cups of passion
    holding cherished memories.
    // loved these verses ... they feel so lively
    beautifully worded. well written

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Resembling love yet
    portraying cruelty
    with scythes of pain,
    strangling lives breath.

    ^I loved this stanza & your word choice above about the rose being 'crimson red'. Typically roses are beautiful, red, romantic & bring forth happiness for us, however, you showed the alternative side and how it may not always be so beautiful, yet those tints of red may symbolize pain.. you've really opened a whole new perspective for the reader here...nicely done! :)