Jim it was a pleasure to do this and I think it turned out very well. The lines blend together and as a collab should be, it is difficult to determine which writer is responsible for the lines. Good job if I do say so. lol

You all did a wonderful job and it is great to see the talent of our club put together to make a masterpiece. Every line was clever and it kept me thinking through out the poem as to the meaning of the poem. The flow was perfect from what I read and you three once again have done an amazing job. Great job and keep writing.

Nicely worded. It is a good length. It is a perfect example of a poem.

5/5