Comments : Kiss ( haiku)

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    If the reader closes their eyes after reading, you can imagine those ripples. So few words to present this lovely image. Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wow thats a beautifulllll imagery...
    the touch of dragonflies and the rippples in the stream ... loved it :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I LOVE Haiku's!.. and this one is Superb. Loved the imagery :) Well Done TJ!

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    A wonderful Haiku that really got a beautiful image across in only three lines. Though many people may say this is a easy form it is actually a hard one to try and get a good image out of a couple of lines. Great job and keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This poem somehow personifies you:)

    A very gentle en loving poem, innocent and sweet.

    Well done, son

    5/5 Ingrid xox

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Your words paint the perfect image. Definitely doesn't take many words to express the beauty of nature...nicely done. Loved it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    I can see it.
    Perfect.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I love the word ripple..i love the way u used it. this tiny piece..is not only natural..bur naturally poetic..
    Perfect.

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is what Haiku is all about...in a few words images come alive...well written!

  • 13 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Most excellent my friend.

    One just needs to spend time by the side of a river to see this spectacle. They dance and skim over the water's tension creating overlapping circles like a conductor waving his baton.

    Take care

    Michael

  • 13 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Most excellent my friend.

    One just needs to spend time by the side of a river to see this spectacle. They dance and skim over the water's tension creating overlapping circles like a conductor waving his baton.

    Take care

    Michael

  • 13 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Most excellent my friend.

    One just needs to spend time by the side of a river to see this spectacle. They dance and skim over the water's tension creating overlapping circles like a conductor waving his baton.

    Take care

    Michael

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    That turned out amazingly for a Haiku. I think most Haiku writers would hate you right about now. Haha.

    5/5

    -Heather