Comments : In my draw

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    A moving poem that I'm sure many people can relate to. having thrown away there love or broken up and then wondering where there at and missing them more and more every day. It starts by getting rid of the memories but then they come back and haunt us in photos and other stuff. Anyway you did a great job describing this and I was really pulled into this poem which is unusual for love poems since I don't like them that much. The flow was amazing and it kept the readers attention on the poem from the beginning stanza all the way to the end. An over all emotion filled poem that had many meanings and things you can learn from it. Great job and keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by M Colella

    A poem we can relate too but put into words of originality. This was amazinly done an emotional turmoil , mixing and twisting thoughts and emotions to the extreme. Brilliantly done