Comments : Winters Long Nights IV

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I like this series on Winter's night that you have done. Each one a different perspective on them. Nice images and the flow is good. Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I enjoyed each stanza of this poem but this one stands out to me as perfection

    "The pale wonderment
    has disappeared now,
    leaving nature alone on its journey
    withholding the glory of its light.

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Still leaflets climb,
    piercing the crusted white,
    surviving and overcoming,
    Winters Long Nights.

    I like this last stanza for it gives a message of perseverance; that no matter how hard or painful situations are we can overcome it! Very nicely penned!