Becoming an Angel

by Jessie   Nov 22, 2010


I'm not sure what to make of here,
My eyes are open and my thoughts are cold
I see what I know,
It's foggy
Unfamiliar

I'm trying to recall what happened last,
Not much is coming to my mind,
Why can't I remember
It's blurry,
Unsettling

Wander further, this is my house
but it's not my home
family photos gone
shadows cast
Unrecognizable

Remembering lights, a scream
why can't I recollect more
I want to understand
It may help
Unamused

I'm seeing people I know,
talking, trying to get attention
screaming, crying
just listen
Unanswered

Squealing of tires, its coming back
the smell of rubber, feel of glass
I remember now,
I'm dead
Unbelievable

Running farther, faster, flying
tear stricken reflection
in the mirror
non-existent
Unfair

Allow everlasting peace to form
breathe new air, serenity
acceptance is key
It's my time
Unleashed

Soaring through the skies, fog gone
family's mourning, but time heals
I know they'll be O.K
so will I
Unafraid

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jess

    Beautiful Poem!
    I Loved IT.. You Got Talent Gurl! :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Andreas Ardha

    Hik's

  • 13 years ago

    by Clown

    This is a beautiful poem, going from confusion, to fear to understanding and acceptance. I feel that we should all accept death when it comes for us. it kind of made me think about my poem Silence Now. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    I agree with Britt. Unbelievably fantastic! Your write has a strong meaning and is written beautifully. The emotion I felt nearly made my heart stop. I loved how you used 'un' words at the end of your stanzas, it made your write all the more powerful! Lovely write. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Mello193

    Beautiful poem