Comments : A Lover's Grief

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Awwww!! this was so sad :( Losing your love to death has to be so hard. I've never experienced that yet and I'm not looking forward to that day if it ever comes.

    This was beautifully but sadly written!

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Loved it 5/5

    "One day, perhaps, I'll move on
    And start my life anew,
    Yet, my lady, as long as I breathe,
    My heart will always beat for you."

    So sad yet so beautiful