Ancient Landscape (Tanka)

Frist of all thank you for introducing me to this type of poetry as I have not come across it before. Secondly I would like to praise your write and give you the full 5/5. A short poem yes but still very well written and enjoyable to read

I love it when I can get to the debth of nature without having to wade through a sea of words ..this is beautiful

This is beautiful.
A very creative imagination;
I love the word choice and the way you used
your vocab.

I love tankas and now bet you did a great one..

Exalted: beauty...
^^this was kind of classical you know..
loved the 1st line..exalted gave it elegance.

murmuring via the wind,
^^?I love the word murmuring; and reminds me
of the river's ripple.. especialy through the wind its just very peaceful and poet.

However I am not fond of using " via"
not i know that the S.count would make you stuck but it realy spoiled the line..

creating music.
^^well i feel like this line gave it more un-needed details..since murmuring through the wind makes it clear.. but i did not mind it as a reader (just giving you my point of view)

Drawing vivid images
to be consumed by the eye.
^^i love the vivid images part; very well said. I love the usage of consumed; althought it was as well detailing the line before it.

Like if you find more images to add rather than that..would be like perfet

however as it is now; sure hits excellence

I love your work
5/5

NIce job on the Tanka.