Comments : Nature's Beauty

  • 13 years ago

    by mckenzie

    A passionate piece describing the beauty of nature. it is VERY sensual and at first suggests otherwise.
    brilliant descriptions throughout.

    "The music of stringed instruments linger
    braising ruby lips,
    undressing endless beauty
    softly by the night."

    seems like she's growing more beautiful here, i imagine being highlighted by a sunset or in the serenity of the night.

    the second stanza is quite a unique take on rainfall. its as if its an offering of affection to the land. very effective.

    i like the third stanza. gives a sense of contentment. "embracing the warmth that lied from within"

    correct me if im wrong but it seems that each stanza reflects a season...

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Joe
    Beautiful and intriguing piece you have penned.
    Nice job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The imagery in this poem reflects well that mother nature is quite a lady

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    An enjoyable read. I liked what you did with this piece. Unfortunately I don't have any critique or tips to offer so I am sorry this comment isn't very helpful it is just that I think this poem is fine the way it is and in my opinion nothing needs changing.

    4/5