In Response To Your Rain

by Melissa   Dec 10, 2010


Quite frankly, my dear
the air never really sat well,
anyway

You behaved like thunder,
struck, with the ferocity
of lightening-
whilst I just stood there,
like a stunned daisy
caught in some unkind storm,
so limp with disappointment

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  • 6 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    There is nothing more to add; the poem influenced me with it's fascinating imagery.
    Word choice and the way you managed your thoughts..
    much been said before me ..just want so congrats you for winning like I congratulated the other heros :P

    well done

    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Siglawoo

    You write like thunder,
    struck, with the ferocity
    of words-
    whilst I just read it,
    again and again
    ...caught in a never ending
    labyrinth.....

    You are amazing.... i keep reading this poem since last night and every time it gives me goosebumps....

  • Oh, and a big congratulations on the win.

  • Excellent. (:

  • 6 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    A stunned daisy..that made me grin, he he.

    Yes, sometimes a person could leave you feeling that way.

    The poem was short, but you did describe the emotions you were going through very vividly and no doubt correctly.

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid
    ps: the downvoting fairy seems to lash out at pretty girls in particular mmmhhhh, does tell us something :p