I Want

by Lori   Dec 21, 2010


I want to tell you
Yell it out to the sky
Shout for all to hear
And ask you why

I want to cry to you
Confess everything I hid
To turn back the time
Undo do everything I did

I want to speak to you
Let you know how I feel
Show you my feelings
Let you know they’re real

I want to be yours
Until the end of time
Let me love you
Hear my heart chime

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  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    I felt this this is a good piece :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Loved this hun

    I want to tell you
    Yell it out to the sky
    Shout for all to hear
    And ask you why

    ^
    Love the start stanza
    You wanting everyone to hear and ask him why.
    Love the use of words short and powerful! And straight to the point

    I want to cry to you
    Confess everything I hid
    To turn back the time
    Undo do everything I did

    ^
    Second stanza
    Your expresing how long you've hid your crys and finally want to confess everything. The last line I think remove the "do" because you already said undo it will flow better.

    But over all beatiful poem
    Great write and flow(:

    5/4

  • 13 years ago

    by SWEET PEA 318

    WHO HIS ONE ABOUT?

  • 13 years ago

    by Alvaro

    Warm.. :)

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