Comments : Unconsented

  • 7 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I don't have much to say about this poem, aside from one correction and the fact that I loved it. It is a story that I wish weren't reality, however much aware I am of it being so more often than not.

    As for the correction, it is in the following line:

    Make a move, get a kiss, win her heart: how full proof.

    After the semi-colon, it should read "how fool-proof".

    Good story,
    5/5
    IdTakeABulletForYou