Comments : Do I Hide My Eyes From You..

  • 13 years ago

    by Siglawoo

    Every night i never go to bed until i read a poem that satiate my thirst, and for tonight your poem was the first and last. i can go to bed now. thank u for saving my time.

    these 4 lines

    Let it rain till every drop of my pain is washed away
    Till the thunder deafens the beating of my heart
    Until the lightning blinds the yearning in my eyes
    Let it rain till I'm drowned in my obsession

    gave me goosebumps. the flow is perfect. and the ending is superb.. i loved it...