Comments : Soon You'll Forget Me

  • 6 years ago

    by Philip

    Very well written, i write very similar stuff since it seems my life has been turned upside down

  • 6 years ago

    by Gness

    Good rhyme scheme going lots of sad emotions written you may want to try spacing it a bit but other than that good job!

  • 6 years ago

    by Lioness

    Hey Sierra,

    I love this poem. I can feel every word you wrote. Beautiful writter

    A lonely poem but you are not alone

    x

  • 6 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Sad but beautifully written.

  • 6 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Sad but beautifully written.

  • 6 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    Wow! EVERY line, I was thinking to myself, is this me in this poem?! I could relate and I loved it! This is how I lived for 4 years and I'm finally free of it! Thank you for this beautiful poem! :) Keep it up!

  • 6 years ago

    by Samuel Dimafelix

    Wow... it makes me think!!
    how to describe your poem?

    "A beautiful sad emotions that ends in brutal destruction"

    you are talented.. keep it up..

  • 6 years ago

    by VeinsofHate

    "Put on a smile and hide the tears
    It's been my secret for many years"

    my favorite lines out of the whole poem. those just stuck out to me. i do the same thing. just hiding all the pain. The poem was amazing. so well written and very good flow. Great job!!!
    5/5