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Very well written, i write very similar stuff since it seems my life has been turned upside down
Good rhyme scheme going lots of sad emotions written you may want to try spacing it a bit but other than that good job!
I love this poem. I can feel every word you wrote. Beautiful writter
A lonely poem but you are not alone
Sad but beautifully written.
by Matthew Schut
Wow! EVERY line, I was thinking to myself, is this me in this poem?! I could relate and I loved it! This is how I lived for 4 years and I'm finally free of it! Thank you for this beautiful poem! :) Keep it up!
by Samuel Dimafelix
Wow... it makes me think!!
how to describe your poem?
"A beautiful sad emotions that ends in brutal destruction"
you are talented.. keep it up..
"Put on a smile and hide the tears
It's been my secret for many years"
my favorite lines out of the whole poem. those just stuck out to me. i do the same thing. just hiding all the pain. The poem was amazing. so well written and very good flow. Great job!!!