and the wind chimes of your breath.
Love this line.
Your writing wears uniqueness like a glove.
I am fascinated by the way you can take a simple word like "breath" and turn it into a sentence that is so very unique and mesmerizing.
tangled in Medusa's hair
The imagery is so vivid, you painted a picture in my mind that is quite - unforgettable !
I am voting this not - because you are absolutely one of my favorite poets nor because you are my friend but because ... this write takes my breath away, magnificent use of words, unique lines, paints a new image with each line, and you have mixed a little mythology into a love poem.
The mythology alone is a difficult task but then to make it about love - very worthy of praise.