Comments : Tonight I Sleep

  • 6 years ago

    by Lu

    Absolutely amazing write Mel.

    and the wind chimes of your breath.
    ^^^
    Love this line.
    Your writing wears uniqueness like a glove.
    I am fascinated by the way you can take a simple word like "breath" and turn it into a sentence that is so very unique and mesmerizing.

    -sunken suns-
    tangled in Medusa's hair
    ^^
    The imagery is so vivid, you painted a picture in my mind that is quite - unforgettable !

    I am voting this not - because you are absolutely one of my favorite poets nor because you are my friend but because ... this write takes my breath away, magnificent use of words, unique lines, paints a new image with each line, and you have mixed a little mythology into a love poem.
    The mythology alone is a difficult task but then to make it about love - very worthy of praise.

    Wonderful read Mel !!!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Gorgeousssssss write specially the thingy about medusas's hair.. And sun.. I litteraly pictured a sunset in someone's hair O.o hahhahaha beautiful!

  • 6 years ago

    by Cindy

    A very beautiful piece. I have to agree with Luanne....this poem is breath taking. I'm glad I stopped and read your poem. Your words draw the reader into your vision.
    Excellent job!
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 6 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win :)
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 6 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Beautifully written...congrats on the win!

  • 6 years ago

    by AngelDust

    Omg.. this is incredable.. the wording is spatacular and the piece as a whole just took my breath away.. I adore the way you described this. It really got my heart. Brilliant. Congrats on the win = )

    Danika
    xoxox