Until Eternity

by Walter F Alvarado   Jan 31, 2011


I open my heart to you
I want you to come in and see
What is best for you.

I want to live for you everyday
I want your ways to be my ways

I have sought and I have found
I have prayed and I have cried
I have worshipped and adored

Now I feel a spiritual dryness
I want to know what is causing my soul
This sadness

I don't like being apart from you

I am delighted when I submit myself
To you
My best days are when I am with you

Help me find my way again
Draw me closer to you

My soul desires you, my heart cries out
To you

Help me find my way so I won't stray again

Hold me tight and don't let me go

I want to live for you
And I want you to live in me
Until I see you in eternity

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  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Very good write... you express your relation with god so well... I liked every part of it...
    Beautiful:)
    5/5 from me..:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Omar

    What a amazing poem you wrote.
    Great job

  • 11 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    This is a very good poem. I really like it. However, there are a few words in here that need fixing.

    Mistakes: The words don�t, I�m, won�t, and don�t all have these little weird characters in them. I believe they appear because of copying and pasting. ^ Like that.

    Typos: fourth stanza, second line, 'to' should be inserted between 'want' and 'know.'

    When I first read this, I thought that it was a love poem, but I have since realized that it is to your god. It is a really beautiful poem.

    Excellent
    5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by Walter F Alvarado

      Thank you very much! I have made the corrections just as you suggested.

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