This is a very good poem. I really like it. However, there are a few words in here that need fixing.

Mistakes: The words don�t, I�m, won�t, and don�t all have these little weird characters in them. I believe they appear because of copying and pasting. ^ Like that.

Typos: fourth stanza, second line, 'to' should be inserted between 'want' and 'know.'

When I first read this, I thought that it was a love poem, but I have since realized that it is to your god. It is a really beautiful poem.

Excellent
5/5

What a amazing poem you wrote.
Great job

Very good write... you express your relation with god so well... I liked every part of it...
Beautiful:)
5/5 from me..:)