From out of the past, love

This is a great poem. I loved it!

Lovely....

Wow! Larry this poem is so beautiful and well-written! I must say that the flow of the poem was so beautiful and it made sense throughout! I really enjoyed it! I must agree with Erna and Nana!!
I liked the stanza about the cat, it seems like a small detail that made an interesting impact on the poem! Greaaaatttt job =D

Given your age, I'm actually comforted that the last two lines of the stanza puzzle you. [You are the same age as my youngest.]
I do believe your talent is astounding, so I am particularly thankful for your praise.

"No one knows about us but the cat,
who simply gazes, eyes slitted,
as we pull the covers on the day,
wrestling cares beyond solution."
^^^ This is my favorite stanza. The imagery you created talking about the cat was wonderful. And those last two lines (of this stanza) baffle me. I'm trying to make sense of it all, trying to see the hidden meaning. What you are trying to say, what you want the person reading this to get out of it, but I don't think I can. I'm guessing a secret or hidden love. If it is, you described it wonderfully. The diction you used really was great. It's one of those things you see and say "Man, I have got to learn how to do that, that's awesome." I can't say anything good about this poem. It's just too amazing for my little brain to wrap around it.
One of my favorites, and going on my favorite list.
Pleeeeeeeeasssseeeee Keep Writing :)
5/5
-Erna