Goodbye

by Whispy.Gypsy   Feb 16, 2011


A gun solves so many problems
a knife solves so many problems
a blade helps the problems
a cut that sinks deeper and deeper help

help me god is all i ask
save me lord is all i need
i need help and i know it
i need soo much help

my family is hurt
my sister is hurt
the ones i love are all hurt because of me

i never meant to cause this much misery
i will end it all i promise
the gun
the knife
a bullet a blade

whichever works the best slowly and painfully
is my choise of "goodbye"
so sorry to my family
sorry to my sister
sorry to my friends
sorry to any one i have ever hurt

for now and forever i say...
...Goodbye...

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  • 12 years ago

    by Blackstar

    Liked it. have to say that ending it isnt a solution. like someone else commented too, there are better ways. 5/5 for this poem.
    Take care

    -blackstar

  • 12 years ago

    by Donna

    Wow this is so deep , yet i feel so true , words close to my own heart ,there are better way and light at the end off the tunnel, you be safe and im a friend if you need one xx Take Care

    Donna xx

  • 12 years ago

    by kimara4955

    Wow, sweetie, this is so sad, i'd love to say, i hope you've never felt that way, but your words tell me you have, stay strong hun, 5/5 great writing, take care xx

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