Falling Water(Tanka)

by Jad   Feb 20, 2011


Drizzling liquid
soaking, filling, nourishing
alights in teardrops
sustains life with nourishment
kept plentiful in nature.

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  • 13 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Awesome write friend. Short, simple & yet so realistic. Very refreshing as its so easy to imagine through your words. Loved it.

    all the best and take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You really brought this image to life. Nature is definitely full of so much life. Rain seems to really bring the beauty out. A beautiful write!

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Oh man me too.. I am in love with Waerfalls and such images.. this was fantastic.. I agree with Cindy.. I too almost heard the sound of the falling water, and almost caught that ..type..of smell :P lol.. hmm fresh nature..

    what a brilliant piece Austin!

    Drizzling liquid

    ^^
    fantastic wording!

    soaking, filling, nourishing
    alights in teardrops
    sustaining life with nourishment
    kept plentiful in nature.

    ^^this is absolutely magical and gorgeous..nature only becomes greater through your words..as sadness becomes beautiful :)

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Reminds me of a light drizzling rain, the sights and sounds of that are so refreshing. Good job with the form.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Austin
    Great Tanka! I can almost hear the water falling.
    Love Cindy