Fallen in love

by ladiiie   Feb 24, 2011


Laying here tossing and turning
as my head starts hurting
remembering you
remembering us
we were such a happy couple, once
its been a while since our path last intertwine
but it feels just like it was yesterday
you holding my hand,
as we walked on the beach
feeling the warmth of the sun
but still feeling that cold breeze
watching the sun as it went down
seeing those colors of the sun shine o' so bright
but from the comer of my eyes i get a glimpse of you
not looking at the sun but watching me.
i smile, and giggle because
i realized that on that October 31, 2009
i had fallen in love for my very first time

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  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Good one..i like the starting of poem...and some of the lines in rhyme...some of the part i like>it's been such a long time ago; but it feels like it was yesterday...you still mesmerizing the moments you and the person together...i like the way you expressed it...but i can't understand a bit in the ending part..maybe you have your own style to write it...however, over all i enjoy reading your stuff..keep on writing=)

  • 13 years ago

    by lokitaaXti

    - omgwassh.! this was a very qood poem .
    i definitelyenjoyed readinq it[:
    qood work[:

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