Family Tree

by Daisy if you do   Mar 25, 2011


Roots intertwine with earth
in my ancestral forest.
One moss sodden oak,
eight sturdy branches,
one hundred sixteen
limbs -my refuge!

-manifestation-

Some limbs have broken,
others litter the ground,
waiting, deteriorating,
clinging to each day.
In time...
they too will die, then vanish,
leaving a bounty of new birth,
creating intricate sub-divisions
of future descendants.

-reverence-

Gazing at the infra-structure,
amazed at its grandeur.
Intoxicated, I stand mouth agape,
peering through to tree top.

-oblivious-

I am the target
to a chock full crow
whom feasted on my naivety
and has now made his nest...
in my family tree.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ste

    Can't find anything to suggest improvement on this one either. It is a very fine poem with a strong current and a wry ending. Excellent verse!

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Holy....crap.....

    I'm one of those people who when they are blown away by a poem I can't really comment right.

    I thought this was just incredible! What an amazing poem. You took the saying "family tree" and made it into something totally beautiful and creative. This write was just awesome. Well written, I wouldn't critique a thing!!
    Chels

  • 13 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Well done, good flow and the image is not bad.

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