Comments : Family Tree

  • 13 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Well done, good flow and the image is not bad.

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Holy....crap.....

    I'm one of those people who when they are blown away by a poem I can't really comment right.

    I thought this was just incredible! What an amazing poem. You took the saying "family tree" and made it into something totally beautiful and creative. This write was just awesome. Well written, I wouldn't critique a thing!!
    Chels

  • 12 years ago

    by Ste

    Can't find anything to suggest improvement on this one either. It is a very fine poem with a strong current and a wry ending. Excellent verse!