When Will It End (Etheree)

by Cindy   Apr 16, 2011


When Will It End

Lies,
rumors
dish the dirt.
Keep it coming,
we all need to hurt.
Trust broken, respect gone.
Who's behind vicious intent?
Shattered emotions, broken souls,
orchestrating each marionette.
While hiding behind computer controls.

Written for a club challenge

Cynthia Graver
April 15, 2011

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  • 2 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    So much rhythm and rhyme, "Shattered emotions, broken souls,
    orchestrating each marionette.
    While hiding behind computer controls".

  • 2 years ago

    by Timothy

    Nice. I like how the lines get longer as well to give a visual appeal to the poem

  • 2 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    'Shattered emotions, broken souls,
    orchestrating each marionette.'

    What a great line Cindy, and the whole poem is perfect!
    I read it several times, getting more from it at each reading. Good work!

  • 2 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    'Shattered emotions, broken souls,
    orchestrating each marionette.'

    What a great line Cindy, and the whole poem is perfect!
    I read it several times, getting more from it at each reading. Good work!

  • 3 years ago

    by The Fairy Mary Poppins

    I love this one, it's relatable, simple in it's own way, truthful to every extent, and finally makes you want to keep on reading to the last word because you know that it's so true! God I wish I could make a poem like this short but filled with so many visuals and emotions. I love this poem it's going to my favorites poem list!

    - Moria Bella Bair

    P.s. thank you for reading my poem! Have a lovely day.