This was really funny. I don't think I've read a poem like this before. That was funny but aslso spoke the truth. There were some parts that were choppy do to trying to get the words to rhyme but other than that it was a really good piece. Thanks for sharing your ideas with us. A lot more people need to read this.. -Nik

This is way more than funny, i still remember 1st time i got to read it how you cracked the hell out of me LOL... for the contest :D and I was wondering why didnt u get to have the highest rates.. yaaa!!

Howeveeerr you are going to do me a bigg favor regarding this poem :)...
read your pms XD

5/5

Thank you ....will do

Let me say that this poem is Politically funny ..
I love the sarcasm it has, the implications it conveyed ..

once again man, really well written poem ..

5/5

Lol, this is hilarious and all true. If only the rest of the U.S. could see this. It's so crazy how so many are dependent on the government. I like your approach to the situation. Humorous, a needed element when people are taking these things too seriously. Wonderful write! 5/5 :) Thanks for sharing! ^_^